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Chapter 1
The Beginning
"come back safe ..... oh and don't talk to strangers!' mum yelled annoyingly as I went out the door for my daily walk, which is about 10km long yeah its a stupidly long walk I know that but it keeps me fit and its gotten me to were I am ! OH I better introduce myself instead of going on about stuff that you don't understand! well my name is Melody Lockstar and I live a fairly boring life but if I go into details its not that boring! so ill go deep down into my pocket of secrets that not many people know about! ok...................... I guess my biggest secret is that im actually a first grade assassin and i'm at an Olympic level for almost all sports and athletic abilities, oh and i'm a super genius ! but my biggest secret is so ironic and cleshay you wont believe me , ok here it goes ................................................ IM 12 YEARS OLD, ha bet you never would of guessed that.
your probably thinking 'how could some one be so good at all of that and be so young?' well thats what I would like to know! but I live with it, any way I should proberly tell you more about the story and what's going on around me!
At the moment were in a small town called tamaochi its some where in the world but I forgot where so don't ask me ask a friend ! any way im on my walk still.......... its kinda boring so I guess I sould describe the layout of the town ! it has buildings and some streets ! and that's pretty much it ! it has to be the most boring place on earth!
" Hey Melody wait up....... damn you walk fast . any way ..... hi!"
"oh hi raven"
ok let me explain out of every one in this town I have two friends and this girl raven is one of them and guess what shes just like me shes super smart and way athletic but she no spy well atlest I don't think so ! any way she often comes walking with me and we chat about things like ..... well like ummmm stuff..... I guess any way we better get back to real life now !
"so raven what ya been up too ?'
................"raven?'
"hello raven"
"earth to raven, come in raven"
"oh sorry mel I just thought I saw something"
"somethings as in what raven"
"well how do I put it ............. well I saw a gremlin go into that man hole just over there"
there was an odd silence for a bit then I burst out laughing my face was red and my eyes were like a leeking tap because I was laughing so much I was crying!
"MELODY IM NOT JOKING"
"im sorry im sorry" then I wiped the remaining tears from my eyes
"what should we do raven should we go follow it ?"
"melody I think we should"
so we both walked over to the man hole and lifted up the lid and we stared in to the man hole. we were shocked at what we saw.
The Beginning
"come back safe ..... oh and don't talk to strangers!' mum yelled annoyingly as I went out the door for my daily walk, which is about 10km long yeah its a stupidly long walk I know that but it keeps me fit and its gotten me to were I am ! OH I better introduce myself instead of going on about stuff that you don't understand! well my name is Melody Lockstar and I live a fairly boring life but if I go into details its not that boring! so ill go deep down into my pocket of secrets that not many people know about! ok...................... I guess my biggest secret is that im actually a first grade assassin and i'm at an Olympic level for almost all sports and athletic abilities, oh and i'm a super genius ! but my biggest secret is so ironic and cleshay you wont believe me , ok here it goes ................................................ IM 12 YEARS OLD, ha bet you never would of guessed that.
your probably thinking 'how could some one be so good at all of that and be so young?' well thats what I would like to know! but I live with it, any way I should proberly tell you more about the story and what's going on around me!
At the moment were in a small town called tamaochi its some where in the world but I forgot where so don't ask me ask a friend ! any way im on my walk still.......... its kinda boring so I guess I sould describe the layout of the town ! it has buildings and some streets ! and that's pretty much it ! it has to be the most boring place on earth!
" Hey Melody wait up....... damn you walk fast . any way ..... hi!"
"oh hi raven"
ok let me explain out of every one in this town I have two friends and this girl raven is one of them and guess what shes just like me shes super smart and way athletic but she no spy well atlest I don't think so ! any way she often comes walking with me and we chat about things like ..... well like ummmm stuff..... I guess any way we better get back to real life now !
"so raven what ya been up too ?'
................"raven?'
"hello raven"
"earth to raven, come in raven"
"oh sorry mel I just thought I saw something"
"somethings as in what raven"
"well how do I put it ............. well I saw a gremlin go into that man hole just over there"
there was an odd silence for a bit then I burst out laughing my face was red and my eyes were like a leeking tap because I was laughing so much I was crying!
"MELODY IM NOT JOKING"
"im sorry im sorry" then I wiped the remaining tears from my eyes
"what should we do raven should we go follow it ?"
"melody I think we should"
so we both walked over to the man hole and lifted up the lid and we stared in to the man hole. we were shocked at what we saw.
ok i started writing this ages ago and i just was all like BINGO ! i can post this crap on DA 
so here it is
dont even ask if i spellchecked and got some one to proof read it CAS I DIDNT MWHAHAHAHAAH Y U ASK ???
eh im to lazy to do it or get some one to XD
oh and heres blurbie thingie:
Melody and her friend Raven get stuck in a different world that is connected to there's by a manhole in the ground. but the twist is the otherworld is slowly breaking and the ground is dying and falling into the abyss will Melody and Raven be able to stop the world breaking and save them selves and the citizens of that planet ?
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